So a mystery has a lot of elements to it.
And to rephrase someone else's thought: a suspense is when you discover a bag under the table where you are eating and a thriller is discovering that the bomb inside the bag is ticking.
So what makes a good suspense?
Characters that we care about mostly. We have to invest in the story people and the life they are struggling with before the suspenseful things that happen to them make us sit up and notice. A good example would be the character of Daniel Silva's stories, Gabriel Allon. He is a master art restorer, and an assassin. Good combo, huh?
Secondly, I would have to say the events in the story. I love a good action suspense where everything is moving toward a deadly and urgent conclusion.
"The grip on my neck intensified, cutting off some of the blood flow to my brain. The vampire spoke.".... from Monster Hunter International by Larry Correia
What do think, Murderers? Would you say suspense is the bag, or the bomb?